Key Takeaways
1. Master Joke Structure: The Core of Comedy
A joke requires two story lines.
Uncover intrinsic structure. Most people recognize a joke even if it doesn't make them laugh, because jokes possess a consistent, intrinsic structure. This structure moves beyond merely describing the desired effect of laughter to explain how a joke works. Understanding this underlying framework is fundamental to crafting effective comedy.
Expectation and surprise. At its heart, a joke operates on the principle of expectation and surprise. The setup creates a "1st Story" in the audience's mind, leading them to expect a certain outcome. The punch then delivers a "2nd Story" that is compatible with the setup but entirely unexpected, shattering the initial assumption. This dynamic interplay is what generates laughter.
Connector and assumptions. The core of this structure involves a "connector"—one thing interpreted in at least two ways. The setup guides the audience to make a "target assumption" about this connector, forming the 1st Story. The punch then provides a "reinterpretation" of that same connector, revealing the surprising 2nd Story and shattering the target assumption.
- Setup: Creates a 1st Story and expectation.
- Punch: Reveals a 2nd Story and surprise.
- Connector: The single element interpreted in two ways.
- Target Assumption: The key assumption in the 1st Story.
- Reinterpretation: The unexpected interpretation in the 2nd Story.
2. Systematic Joke Writing: The Joke Prospector
You explore a joke’s passageways by asking questions.
Beyond mere inspiration. While inspiration is valuable, joke writing is a learnable skill, not a mystical act. The "Joke Prospector" system provides a step-by-step method to generate material consistently. It comprises two phases: the "Joke Map" for topic selection and setup creation, and the "Joke Mine" for digging out punches.
The Joke Map. This phase helps narrow broad ideas into specific details, recognizing that "the jokes are in the details." It guides you from a chosen topic (a single subject presenting "something wrong") to an association list, then to a "punch-premise" (a negative opinion about a smaller aspect), a "setup-premise" (the opposite opinion), and finally, a series of setups.
- Topic: A single subject presenting "something wrong."
- Association List: Related details.
- Punch-Premise: Negative opinion on a smaller aspect.
- Setup-Premise: Opposite opinion to the punch-premise.
- Setups: Examples expressing the setup-premise.
The Joke Mine. Once setups are generated, the Joke Mine systematically extracts punches. It involves listing assumptions about a setup, identifying the target assumption and its connector, brainstorming reinterpretations for the connector, composing a 2nd Story based on a chosen reinterpretation, and finally, writing a concise punch that expresses this 2nd Story. This iterative process allows for exploring multiple comedic "tunnels" from a single setup.
3. Polish Your Material: From Funny to Funnier
Brevity is levity.
Refine for maximum impact. A first draft is just the beginning; true comedic power comes from rigorous polishing. Unnecessary words and information dilute a joke's impact, as "energy spent by the audience thinking is energy taken away from laughing." Jokes should be immediately understandable, allowing the audience to react rather than analyze.
Strategic delivery techniques. Several guidelines enhance a joke's effectiveness. Ending the punch with the "reveal"—the pivotal word or action that shatters the target assumption—ensures the laugh lands cleanly without being talked over. Using words with hard consonants (like 'K' or 'P') can make phrases inherently funnier, while the "rhythm of three" sets up an expectation only to surprise with the third element.
- End with the reveal: Place the punchline's core at the very end.
- Hard consonants: Use words like "cupcake" or "bucks" for more punch.
- Rhythms of three: Two beats set a pattern, the third breaks it.
Personalization and relevance. Making characters specific (friends, relatives, public figures) and localizing references (local landmarks, cities) creates verisimilitude and deeper audience connection. Adapting jokes to topical events keeps material fresh. While generally avoiding puns, clever or intentionally groan-worthy ones can be exceptions. Finally, "tagging" jokes with additional punches maximizes laughs from a single setup, significantly increasing "LPMs" (laughs per minute).
4. Build Coherent Routines: The Routine Builder
Maintain a joke and routine file.
Organize for flow. Once you have a collection of jokes, the challenge is to string them together into a coherent routine. A well-maintained joke file, categorized by subject, is essential for this process. The "Routine Builder" helps transform disparate jokes into a flowing narrative that expresses your unique comedic voice.
Structure your material. The process begins by putting each joke on a separate card or digital entry, then organizing them into logical categories. The next step involves arranging these jokes so that "one thought leads to the next," creating a natural progression. This might follow a logical path or a more whimsical "flighty line of thought," depending on your personal style.
Rewrite for performance. The final, most complex step is continuous rewriting. This involves introducing the routine conversationally (stating the topic, punch-premise, or setup-premise), adding subtle "segues" between categories, and rephrasing jokes to sound natural when spoken aloud. Searching for an overarching "story line" within your material helps link jokes together, creating a cohesive and engaging performance that feels like a natural conversation.
5. Rehearse Experiences, Not Just Words: The POV Method
How you rehearse is how you will perform.
Beyond memorization. Stand-up comedy is more than just memorizing jokes; it's about interpreting them in ways that make people laugh. The common mistake of memorizing words verbatim leads to unnatural performances, as words alone do not activate the full range of human behavior—body language, vocal tone, and emotion—which constitute 93% of communication.
Separate Creator and Critic. To access your natural sense of humor, you must separate your "Creator" (inventing, expressing) from your "Critic" (improving, crafting). Rehearsing with the Critic constantly interjecting negative self-talk leads to self-consciousness on stage, hindering spontaneity and audience connection. Designate a physical "Critic Spot" for evaluation and a "Rehearsal Space" for creative exploration to train your mind to keep these functions distinct.
Memorize sensory experiences. A joke is a comic response to an "experience"—sensory information (pictures, sounds, feelings) that inspires the humor. The "POV Method" transforms material into vivid, holographic memories by physically acting out all relevant Points of View (POVs):
- Narrator POV: Observing and describing the scene.
- Self POV: Participating in the experience as yourself.
- Character POV: Portraying others (people, animals, objects).
This multi-perspective enactment embeds the joke as a rich sensory experience, allowing you to perform it naturally and draw the audience into your "comedy movie."
6. Command the Stage: Professional Performance Techniques
Your job is to be funny.
Dynamic audience interaction. A comedian's primary job is to be funny, which often requires adapting to the audience rather than rigidly sticking to a script. "Comic timing" is not a fixed skill but a spontaneous creation, a feedback loop between performer and audience. Professional delivery also involves mastering microphone technique, ensuring clear communication and stage presence.
- Microphone technique: Hold at chin level, speak over, manage cord, gesture with free hand.
- Stage entry: Take mike out of stand, place stand back, get on stage during applause.
Strategic preparation. Effective performance begins before you even step on stage. Always tape record your shows to review and learn from audience responses. Prepare a concise "show list" using code words as an emergency guide. Craft a compelling introduction for the M.C. that sets the tone, uses credits, or incorporates your subject matter, avoiding generic clichés.
Engage and adapt. Warm up physically, vocally, and psychologically to ensure you hit your stride quickly. Greet the audience like friends, acknowledging the obvious about yourself if it might distract them. Avoid common "comics' clichés"—both physical mannerisms and verbal phrases—that make you seem unoriginal. Crucially, when the audience is laughing, "shut up" and let them enjoy the moment, maintaining your state or thinking ahead, rather than talking over their response.
7. Conquer Fear: Embrace Challenges as Growth
If what you’re doing isn’t working - do anything else.
Reframe stage fright. "Stage fright" is often a misinterpretation of readiness—an adrenaline shot preparing you for an extraordinary situation. Instead of repressing it, reframe fear as excitement or energy. Be honest with the audience about your feelings; transparency often disarms them and builds trust. A warm-up ritual and staying sober help manage pre-show jitters, while on-stage, staying emotionally associated with your material keeps your focus off fear.
Cope with going blank. Forgetting material is a common fear, but it's a learning opportunity. The key is to remain playful and honest. Admit you've forgotten, take a breath, check your show list, or "riff" (improvise with the audience). This shifts attention from your internal struggle to external interaction, often bringing your memory back or creating new comedic moments.
- Be honest: "I've just forgotten everything I've ever known."
- Stay playful: Turn the situation into a joke.
- Riff: Engage the audience to regain focus.
Deal with bombing. Bombing—when jokes don't land—is an inevitable part of a comedian's journey and should be reframed as "feedback," not failure. If your material isn't working, "do anything else." This flexibility is crucial. Continue to commit, maintain your sense of humor (laugh at yourself), be honest about the lack of laughs, and use "savers" (pre-prepared lines for tough spots).
- Savers: "That joke was much funnier when I wrote it."
- Honesty: Acknowledge the bombing; don't make excuses.
- Personalize: Engage individuals to re-energize the show.
8. Seek Diverse Stage Experience: The Path to Mastery
Perform anywhere you can get in front of people.
Experience is paramount. Formal training provides techniques, but true comedic mastery is forged through consistent stage time. Waiting for the "right time" is a fallacy; the "right time" is now. Embrace the initial failures as essential learning, understanding that "good judgment comes from experience; and experience comes from bad judgment."
Leverage open mikes. Open mikes are crucial proving grounds, despite often challenging conditions (early/late slots, small audiences, being "bumped"). They offer invaluable opportunities to test material and build resilience. Showcase clubs, while harder to secure, provide more consistent stage time and exposure, especially if you offer clean material and adhere to time limits.
Create your own opportunities. Don't wait for opportunities; create them. Organize your own comedy nights at local venues, pooling resources with other comics. Join public speaking groups like Toastmasters, or offer to perform for charity and civic club meetings. Even social parties, parks, streets, or dance bars can serve as unconventional stages to hone your craft and accumulate diverse performance experience.
9. Relentless Refinement: Making a Good Show Great
The ability to ruthlessly edit your own jokes is the most valuable skill you’ll ever learn in comedy.
Continuous evolutionary loop. Polishing a show is an ongoing cycle of developing, rehearsing, performing, and refining. It's not a one-time fix but a commitment to continuous improvement. The most effective way to begin this process is by playing back recordings of your performances (audio or video) to objectively assess what works and what doesn't.
Rate and edit ruthlessly. After playback, rate each joke (A for big laughs, B for medium, C for weak, D for smiles, F for silence). The goal is to eventually fill your show with only "A" material, understanding that only a small percentage of jokes you write will reach this level. "Ruthlessly edit" out marginal jokes, but don't discard them; put them aside to "percolate" as they might become killer bits later with a different delivery or context.
Rewrite and rearrange. Rewriting involves rephrasing jokes for clarity, conciseness, and impact, applying principles like ending with the reveal or using hard consonants. Rearranging the routine ensures a smooth flow, often requiring further editing of individual jokes to fit the new context. This iterative process of editing, rewriting, and rearranging, guided by audience feedback and self-evaluation, transforms a good show into a truly great one.
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Review Summary
Step by Step to Stand-Up Comedy receives mostly positive reviews, praised for its practical approach to joke writing and performance techniques. Readers appreciate the detailed breakdown of joke structure and find the book helpful for both beginners and experienced comedians. Some criticize the outdated content and repetitive examples, while others note the audiobook version lacks accompanying materials. Overall, reviewers recommend it as a valuable resource for aspiring stand-up comedians and writers looking to improve their comedic skills.
